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Post by kotaro7914 Sat Mar 05, 2011 5:40 am

Kotaro wrapped his hand in a long cloth and walked out the bathroom. The burning was intensifying slowly. Kotaro walked toward the back of the hospital, making sure he was alone. He unwrapped his hand. Almost all the skin on the right side of his left hand had been burned away. His flesh underneath a dark crimson.
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Post by neon kun Sat Mar 05, 2011 5:43 am

She smoothed Renee's beautiful black hair and smiled at her warmly. "I'm always here if you need someone to listen," she said. "I'll go check on Kotaro now, okies?"

She walked out of the room and asked a nurse if she saw Kotaro and someone saw him walk out. So she ran out, unsure if she was going the right way.

Walking around, she eventually ended up at the back of the hospital and saw Kotaro, but more specifically, his hand. "Kotaro! What's going on?!"

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Post by zergio Sat Mar 05, 2011 5:46 am

Renee smiled, laying in bed. The room began to twist and twirl, just like in the hallways. She saw the men again. Walking down the hall, entering every once in awhile to check on her status. She hid under her covers, crying just a tiny bit.

"They're not really there......... they're not really there........."
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Post by kotaro7914 Sat Mar 05, 2011 5:46 am

Kotaro quickly covered his hand. "It's nothing. I'll be fine." Kotaro stood up and tried to walk away, but the burning in his hand suddenly spread to his arm. The skin on his left arm was burning away, scarring the flesh underneath. The pain was enough to cause Kotaro to collapse. He didn't pass out, but he could barely move.
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Post by neon kun Sat Mar 05, 2011 5:48 am

Resha quickly ran towards him, and held him upright, though with difficulty. He was bigger than her and she wasn't very strong. "Kotaro, please, tell me," she said, worry evident in her voice. "I'm a doctor, I might be able to help! So please."
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Post by zergio Sat Mar 05, 2011 5:51 am

Renee felt someone pull the covers away. It was a doctor, going to ask her a couple questions. But, to Renee, it was another one of the men. She knew it was a doctor, that the man wasn't really there, but......

She let out a shrill scream and hid under her blankets, sobbing again. The doctor nodded and left the room, leaving Renee alone.

"They're not there............................ they're not there...................... they're..........."

Her crying drowned out her voice.
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Post by kotaro7914 Sat Mar 05, 2011 5:52 am

Kotaro stuggled to carry his own weight. "There's nothing you can do for this. I'll be fine." Kotaro reached into his bag and pulled out the stone. It had reverted to red. "So that's why." Kotaro stood upright and placed the red stone in his burned hand. The skin began to regenerate, but it was a black grayish tint. "We gotta get to Renee."
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Post by neon kun Sat Mar 05, 2011 6:02 am

"There's nothing I can do!?" she was generally very much a calm and understanding person but she was at her limit. "How can you even say that!? I don't even know what's happening to you, and you don't know what I can do as a doctor!" she was hurt and insulted, but it pained her to be thought unable to do anything for a friend.

She shook her head. "You don't have to tell me," she said and bowed, for politeness sake. "But if you ever change your mind, I'll be willing to listen."

And she started walking back to Renee's room.
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Post by kotaro7914 Sat Mar 05, 2011 6:04 am

Kotaro flexed his arm and hand. It worked like normal, besides the odd color. "Resha, listen. I would like to tell you, but it's very confusing and I don't like explaining it more then once. I'll tell you when we get to Renee." Kotaro followed Resha. A soul is being tampered.
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Post by neon kun Sat Mar 05, 2011 6:08 am

[you skipped zegio :O]
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Post by kotaro7914 Sat Mar 05, 2011 6:08 am

(Sry)
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Post by zergio Sat Mar 05, 2011 6:10 am

The room returned to normal, all of the people looking the way they're suppose to. She smiled when a doctor came in, looking like a doctor, and not a nightmare. He asked her some questions, then told her she had a visitor. She wondered who it was.

In walked her first boyfriend. The military contacted him, since Renee forgot to remove him from the contact list in her file. He awkwardly smiled.

Renee got up, her hair covering her eyes as she walked over to him.

"I got a call from the military, and they forced me to come here. Do you-"

He couldn't finish his sentence before Renee started kicking his ass, cussing like there was no tomorrow. By the time they separated the two, the man had gotten some serious injuries, and Renee was riled up, pined to the ground by a couple of doctors. When he left her sight, she instantly calmed down. The doctors seeing this, returned her to her bed.

"Note to self.......... get that ****** contact list changed........"
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Post by neon kun Sat Mar 05, 2011 6:14 am

She stopped and turned to look at him. She smiled at him faintly. "Like I said, I won't force you to tell me. I just want to be able to help, in any way I can. I don't want another friend dying on me or getting hurt without me be able to do anything about it!" She looked away and started running towards Renee's room. She was surprised herself - she guessed Will's and Fang's death were still lingering in her heart, hurting.

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Post by kotaro7914 Sat Mar 05, 2011 6:16 am

Kotaro nodded. He followed her to Renee's room. If a soul is being tampered, that means there is a hostile here. Kotaro hoped he didn't look worried. Resha couldn't fight and Renee was injured. Both were targets. Who will it target next?
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Post by zergio Sat Mar 05, 2011 6:18 am

Renee closed her eyes. She was having hallucinations, AND the military called forth the man she hated the most. She was ready to kill someone. Her mind was at the point of snapping, where she would go plain berserker on everyone in sight. She tried to keep control, asking the nurse to give her 4 pills. She swallowed them, and began to calm down.
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Post by neon kun Sat Mar 05, 2011 6:25 am

Before she entered Renee's room, she breathed in and breathed out to calm herself. Upon opening it, she smiled brightly. "RENEEEEEEEEEE! HIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!" she waved happily at her. "I'm baaaaaaaaaaack!"

"Huh?" she blinked, something seemed to hit her back, but seeing nothing happened, she shrugged it off and went beside Renee.
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Post by kotaro7914 Sat Mar 05, 2011 6:27 am

Kotaro felt a small stinging in his arm. "It's in this room." Kotaro walked in and walked over to Renee, doing his best to keep his arm hidden. "Renee, these hallucinations, did they start when you got here or did they happen before?"
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Post by zergio Sat Mar 05, 2011 6:29 am

Renee fell right out of bed when Resha entered.

"Give me a heart attack, why dontcha!?"

Renee stood up, clenching her heart, her hair messy from the fall.

"They started the moment it happened in the hall." Renee replied. And it happened again in here..........."

Renee crawled into bed, keeping her head poked out of the covers.
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Post by neon kun Sat Mar 05, 2011 6:32 am

Resha laughed happily. "I'm sorry! I'm sorry," she grinned. "I was just excited to see you again!"

She tilted her head. "What's this about?" But she felt unbelievably sleepy all of a sudden. "Oh," she walked towards a chair and her eyesight became blurry. "Hey, something's weird..."
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Post by kotaro7914 Sat Mar 05, 2011 6:37 am

First in the hall, then here. The stone reacted in the hall first. Kotaro turned to see Resha acting strange. "It's after her..." Kotaro walked to the middle of the room and took out the stone. It was jet black. He placed it on the floor. "Renee, Resha, listen. I'll be right back. No matter what happens to my body, don't go near it or the stone." Kotaro clapped his hands and placed them on the stone. His body fell to the floor.

Kotaro was still in the hospital, but his soul was the thing moving. He looked around the room. There was something wrong with Renee's and Resha's souls. They were connected to a cord. Kotaro felt something claw at his face, leaving new marks. He walked forward, following the cords.

3 claw marks appeared on Kotaro's body.
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Post by zergio Sat Mar 05, 2011 6:39 am

Renee looked horrified at Kotaro. His body wasn't doing anything, but all of a sudden, claw marks appeared on it! She hid her head under the covers, wishing this day would end.
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Post by neon kun Sat Mar 05, 2011 6:41 am

Resha found it hard to keep awake, but she tried her best to, unable to react so much as Kotaro started to fall on the floor unmoving.

What's going on?

And in a split second, she felt a numbing pain shot through her body. "It... hurts..."
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Post by kotaro7914 Sat Mar 05, 2011 6:46 am

Kotaro saw a small light travel on Resha's cord. As it reached her, she cringed. "It's still attacking them." Kotaro quickened his pace. He saw a light headed to Renee. "I gotta stop this fast!" Kotaro followed the cords to the back of the hospital. As he entered the storage room he spotted the soul attacking them. It seemed to be a middle aged man. He wore a doctors uniform. There was a T.Circle on the back of his neck. He must have died here. Kotaro was suddenly pushed back by a large force. His left arm cutting nearly completely open from an invisible blade.

Kotaro's arm suddenly split open, the wound gaping.

The doctor soul turned and glared at Kotaro. "Dont disturb me! I am Operating!"
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Post by zergio Sat Mar 05, 2011 6:49 am

Renee poked her head out of the blankets, horrified to see the men coming at her, reaching for her. Resha was gone, and so was Kotaro. She flipped the bed at them, narrowly missing Resha, even though Renee couldn't see her. She saw arms beginning to push the mattress away. There was only one way out. Renee opened the window, it on the second story. She was scared, but not as scared towards the men coming at her. Renee prepared to jump.
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Post by neon kun Sat Mar 05, 2011 6:52 am

The pain subsided but as she opened her eyes, she couldn't see the others - not Renee, not Kotaro's body.

And she was alone. Her phobia started acting up and she felt so scared.

In a while, she felt a slash on her arm; when she looked, there was a big cut, and blood was coming out.

But as she looked forward, she saw her brother holding a dagger, aimed at her. "Nooooo..." she started screaming.
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